Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Favorite place
Beams of light hit me as i stare at the strong flowing water. Smells of evergreen pines and decomposing stumps make way to my nose while i rest comfortably over the water on a broken tree. If self awareness or nirvana were my goal, this would be my expanse id escape to. Tunes of Lucy and Rita stream through my ears creating an experience that can not be compared. Every few seconds through my peripheral vision, i spot a jumping fry's preparing for their long journey. As i leave, i let a final sigh of relief out knowing my return to this haven would be soon.
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Nice description! Where is this place? And what is a "jumping fry"? I loved your "if self awareness or nirvana were my goal" statement.
ReplyDeleteThis is great work, it really made me feel as if I were there as well. This would be a place I would definitely want to go to.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described the effect it had on multiple sensory levels. That's something I have trouble with!
ReplyDeleteI like how much detail you had in this post, the post wasn't lengthy, yet it had so much detail and information in it. Excellent job, I believe.
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