1.Introduction
a. how wifi is important.
b. Its application to the everyday lifestyle of many.
c. The improvement to society because of it being free.
d. Thesis
2. Body Paragraph 1 & 2 - The importance of wifi
3. Body paragraph 3 & 4 - The application to everyday life
4. Body paragraph 5 & 6 - The improvement to society because of free wifi
5. Conclusion
There needs to be more of an expansion of your key points, as you're pretty vague here. Moreover, what does the oposition state? Why? This should be clearly related in your outline and it is not here. Review the topical/formal outline---what subpoints might you address in the body paragraphs that follow? What ideas could you examine a little more in depth about why WiFi is important to society?
ReplyDeleteI feel like this is a geat topic! Although, I don't know if I would be able to write a whole essay out of the topic.
ReplyDeleteWell your introduction is good. In my opinion if your other ideas had more elaboration like your first point, I think this would be a solid outline. Add some more information to it, and you'd be great. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteThis would be a little difficult to write a big paper with not a lot of points. Just find some more points and you'll be in good shape.
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